Is my story interesting?

This sounds alot like The Giver. Its a great story, check it out sometime. Now, on to your story, i think it's very well structured. One suggestion i would like to make is to describe the material things in the story a bit more. Tell how the city looks, run down, or bursting with life. Talk about the clothes, how all the people look, how the bracelets look, how the buildings look. This helps the reader visualize the everything and make the story more vibrant. I think you made a solid attempt at it, but I think there is much more description you can add. If i helped, a best answer would be much appreciated